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Friendlier usability through copywriting

The purpose of this document is to identify the places in the UI where we need to update the copywriting to ensure that umbraco treats new users in a forthcoming and inspiring way, without any "umbracish" lingo

Areas that needs improved copywriting

Installer

Text can be shorter and at the same time more helpful, friendly and descriptive.

Boost

Rewrite some parts.
Add subtitles.

Tooltips

Both the installer and Boost are the Umbraco parts with most text. Maybe the main problem in the copywriting area is the lack of text.
What about adding a description to tooltips?
Comparison with Word (which, agreed, is sometimes too verbose)
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But imagine this:

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Last edited Nov 9, 2008 at 10:52 AM by RubenV, version 7

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